Post by Drake on Jan 4, 2009 11:36:51 GMT -5
Username: franzwalters
Character Name: Franz Walters
Rank: Private
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Nazi/German Army
Nationality: American
Character History:
Staff Notes:
Character Name: Franz Walters
Rank: Private
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Nazi/German Army
Nationality: American
Character History:
My name(Pause)Is Franz Walters.I have wanted to serve Germany ever since my brothers moved into the combat.I want to take down the russians.And,every other enemy of Germany! I may be 24 and young looking,but I can still fight.At 16,I fire my first rifle.At first I missed the target,But with a little reaiming I was able to get it.My last brother,Who was deployed a month ago,Made kind of a combat simulator.He also gave me a Luger.With the Luger I took out almost every target.I was close,But I only chipped off a part of target.I also had to do it after a army roll.But after a little training I got it.My brother let me keep his Luger.But I don't have to bring it if I'm not allowed to.Writing Sample:
Huh?"Who's There?!"I'll duck for cover."WHO'S THEIR!!!""I WANT TO KNOW NOW!""Dammit still nothing.""Ok one thing to do.I lined up my Kar98 with a camaflouged area.I took a shot,hoping to hit something or something.Nothing."Ok Now Im starting to get ticked off.""YOU GOT TO THE COUNT OF 3 TO SHOW YOURSELF!!!"Ugh,Still nothing."Fine.Be that way!"I'll throw a grenade.-Boom-Still nothing.I'll just stay in cover for a little bit.Hmm,I wonder how many shots I have left.-Sigh-None.Great.Just great.Wait!That's it my brothers Luger.-Pop pop-Still nothing?I don't get it.Fine,I can't wait out here forever.I'll go back to the frontlines and check around every while.Approved/Denied?: Denied
Staff Notes:
Sorry still denied. To short and you need to talk in third person. Look at some accepted applications to get a feel for what really needs to be wrote.
Thanks,
~Austin!