Post by Daniel on Mar 20, 2010 17:45:34 GMT -5
Username: Washi
Character Name:
Rank: Vladamier Romanov Goluckivich
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Russian
Nationality: Russian
Character History:
Years went by and as Vlad grew up he decided he would join the Soviet Red Army. Well about 5 years before he joined the Soviets, he met a wonderful girl named Eva Smirnov. Well about the time he turns age 20, he proposes to Eva and about 3 months later he was recruited by the Soviet Red Army. 5 years later, after joining the Soviets he started thinking “Maybe if I work hard and never give up like Roman said maybe I can become a commander.” [/color]Well as it so happens roman started to work hard on becoming 1st Lieutenant. About 2 years later after hard work and sacrifice he caught the attention of high ranking officers. So one day they came to the commanding officer of Vlad’s platoon and talked with the commander. The commander of the platoon was furious that Vladamier got the attention of the officers and the commander didn’t so the commander lied. As one of the privates were listening he called Vlad over to him and told vlad what was going on so Vlad walks in and salutes the Generals. The Generals salute back. Then they ask him “why are there rumors of you saying that you work hard and help your fellow man.” [/color] So Vlad told them “The rumors are true, sir.”[/color] But they did not believe him so they asked every one of the platoon and they said “The rumors of Vlad are true.” [/color]So the Generals promote Vlad to 1st Lieutenant and demoted the platoon leader to private. But before they left Vlad asked the generals “If it is alright if I can be a tank commander of the new T-34 tank and give the Sergeant back his platoon and rank.” [/color]They look at him and said “OK you have a deal.” [/color]One year later, he became the first tank commander to drive the T-34 during World War II. He also got married to Eva and has 3 wonderful kids.
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Character Name:
Rank: Vladamier Romanov Goluckivich
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Russian
Nationality: Russian
Character History:
Vladamier Romanov Goluckivich was born on February 12, 1915 in a small village, south of Moscow. Vladamier was born to the parents of Olga and Sergei Goluckivich. His mother Olga was a Sniper of the Bolshevik Red Army and his father Sergei was a soldier of the Bolshevik Red Army. During the Civil War both his parents died and he became an orphan until 3 days later an old friend of Vlad’s father, nicknamed “Demon Eye” Roman Ivanov, went to the Goluckivich house to find Vlad. Before Sergei’s death, as him and Demon Eye sat around a table with some friends playing poker, that is when he told Roman “If anything happened to me to take care of Vladamier.”[/color] The way Sergei died was from a delayed grenade that landed next to him. So Sergei did what any man would do; he instantly picked it up and tried to throw it but it detonated as he threw it killing him instantly. Vlad's Mother, Olga, was killed by another sniper during the Civil War.
Years went by and as Vlad grew up he decided he would join the Soviet Red Army. Well about 5 years before he joined the Soviets, he met a wonderful girl named Eva Smirnov. Well about the time he turns age 20, he proposes to Eva and about 3 months later he was recruited by the Soviet Red Army. 5 years later, after joining the Soviets he started thinking “Maybe if I work hard and never give up like Roman said maybe I can become a commander.” [/color]Well as it so happens roman started to work hard on becoming 1st Lieutenant. About 2 years later after hard work and sacrifice he caught the attention of high ranking officers. So one day they came to the commanding officer of Vlad’s platoon and talked with the commander. The commander of the platoon was furious that Vladamier got the attention of the officers and the commander didn’t so the commander lied. As one of the privates were listening he called Vlad over to him and told vlad what was going on so Vlad walks in and salutes the Generals. The Generals salute back. Then they ask him “why are there rumors of you saying that you work hard and help your fellow man.” [/color] So Vlad told them “The rumors are true, sir.”[/color] But they did not believe him so they asked every one of the platoon and they said “The rumors of Vlad are true.” [/color]So the Generals promote Vlad to 1st Lieutenant and demoted the platoon leader to private. But before they left Vlad asked the generals “If it is alright if I can be a tank commander of the new T-34 tank and give the Sergeant back his platoon and rank.” [/color]They look at him and said “OK you have a deal.” [/color]One year later, he became the first tank commander to drive the T-34 during World War II. He also got married to Eva and has 3 wonderful kids.
[/blockquote]Writing Sample:
As Vladamier and his tank crew of the T-34 were going through a farmland for a recon mission looking for a Panzer Tank that was suspected of attacking an Allied fuel reserve. When suddenly and unexpectingly a Nazis Panzershriek team popped out of a Grassy field then fired upon the T-34 but it was a miss. That is when Vlad told his driver to turn the tank 45 degrees and the driver did. Then Vlad said “Fire” and fired its Machine gun into the field killing the panzershriek team. During all the commotion the Panzer IV tank, that attacked the fuel reserve, drives up to the side of the T-34 tank and is about 50 yards away and fires its first shot at Vladamier and crew and misses. So Vlad turns the T-34 tank turret and told his Assistant commander to hold from firing until told to fire. As they sat there the Panzer IV fires again and missing about 1 foot away from the tank. That is when Vladamier told his Assistant to fire then the assistant presses the trigger and fires at the Panzer IV and hits the tank but only hits the treads of the tank, immobilizing it. Then Vlad tells his loader to load the gun and his Assistant to fire again. Then they fire again and hit the Panzer IV this time destroying it. As they watch the tank burst into flames they then turn the tank around and drive the T-34 back to base to tell the Commander in charge the mission was a success.
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