Paradox Application

[Eric]

Username: Darksec
Character Name: Paradox
Rank: Sergeant
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:

Paradox already saved hes squad and he never give up at a battle , He always want to fight the ennemy , he don't ask how many but where they are . Mostly of the time he must retreat cause the ennemy is too much strong against a little squad . But he always take a revenge !

Writing Sample:

It leaves are knife with the case or it would face has a close combat, it moves back gently and arms its machine-gun gently. It continues moved back. When it arrives has a bush it says “thunder” and awaits an answer.

Approved/Denied?: Denied
Staff Notes:

[green]My reasons are as follows: You have a short bio on you character, so how are you comrades going to think of Rping with you when they don't understand you character. Secondly, I have no idea who you are talking about in your writing sample. If you would like to read the accepted applications please do so.

~Walter Gunther[/green]