Post by Eric Lefebvre on Aug 25, 2009 17:52:22 GMT -5
Username: Darksec
Character Name: Ryan Feel
Rank:
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:
Staff Notes:
Character Name: Ryan Feel
Rank:
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:
Ryan Feel is a good guy who wan't to help everyone . He's a not bad shooter , Not an experienced soldier but he not fear anyone .Writing Sample:
He take hes knife and prepare for a melee combat , he little bit scared . He take hes pistol at hes right hand and the knife in left hand . he go hide at a bush and wait the guy follow him . If it's an ennemy he will try to kill him in silence with hes knife , if it's a civilian he will leave him alone .Approved/Denied?: Denied
Staff Notes:
[green] I denied this because, it looks as though you weren't trying. I found numerous spelling and grammar errors. If you would like to look at the other applications that were accepted, please do.
~Walter Gunther[/green]