Post by washi on Jul 21, 2008 22:48:52 GMT -5
Sounds great nice application nice to have anotehr tank commander welcome to the board Lieutenant. You will be getting basic Officer equipment and an M$ Sherman, also a platoon of 6 units to operate your tank. Join the 101st Airborne under Allied/Companies/Platoons/Battalions Please just post and put teh names of your 6 units
Thanks, Welcome,
~Austin
Character Name:
1st Lieutenant Derrick Bartel
Nationality:
- USA
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
US
Character History:
- Derrick Bartel was born on May 25, 1919 in the small town of New Draven, Iowa. The population there was, just say everyone knew each other. He was captain of the football team but the ironic thing was he wasn't very popular just because he wanted to join the Army like his father, who fought in the in the first World War. In that town if you wanted everyone to like you you had do what they say. That meant not joining the military. He graduated from high school then got an invite to the West Point Acadamy where he trained to become a Tank Commander.
Then after he left West Point he was shipped off to the UK where he got familiar with the M4 Sherman and met his crew.
Military Rank:1st Lieutenant
request for Tank Commander
Writing Sample:
As Derrick's tank sat there hidden he started to think to himself "There is 1 Panther to the far right and two Tigers behind the Panther hmmm...." then his driver asked "What are we going to do sir?" Then Derrick said with a smile,"Just sit and wait because when the Panther comes in front of us we'll let him go by so with the Tigers. As they are far way from us then we'll move for the kill.Got it." then his crew answers with "Yes, Sir"
As they sat there the Panther goes by then the 2 Tigers. As the 2nd Tiger goes by they come out and fire and it is a direct hit destroying the Tiger. As that was happening the 2nd Tiger starts to turn around while the Panther gets a way. While the tiger was turning around they fire a second shot this time it hit but immobilizes it. then as the Tiger turns its turret Derrick tells the driver to move the tank quickly to the left so he does then the tiger fires and misses and then Derrick's team fires its another direct hit. As they looked around they noticed the panther got away. Then Derrick said, "Well 2 out of three aint bad."
Thanks, Welcome,
~Austin
Character Name:
1st Lieutenant Derrick Bartel
Nationality:
- USA
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
US
Character History:
- Derrick Bartel was born on May 25, 1919 in the small town of New Draven, Iowa. The population there was, just say everyone knew each other. He was captain of the football team but the ironic thing was he wasn't very popular just because he wanted to join the Army like his father, who fought in the in the first World War. In that town if you wanted everyone to like you you had do what they say. That meant not joining the military. He graduated from high school then got an invite to the West Point Acadamy where he trained to become a Tank Commander.
Then after he left West Point he was shipped off to the UK where he got familiar with the M4 Sherman and met his crew.
Military Rank:1st Lieutenant
request for Tank Commander
Writing Sample:
As Derrick's tank sat there hidden he started to think to himself "There is 1 Panther to the far right and two Tigers behind the Panther hmmm...." then his driver asked "What are we going to do sir?" Then Derrick said with a smile,"Just sit and wait because when the Panther comes in front of us we'll let him go by so with the Tigers. As they are far way from us then we'll move for the kill.Got it." then his crew answers with "Yes, Sir"
As they sat there the Panther goes by then the 2 Tigers. As the 2nd Tiger goes by they come out and fire and it is a direct hit destroying the Tiger. As that was happening the 2nd Tiger starts to turn around while the Panther gets a way. While the tiger was turning around they fire a second shot this time it hit but immobilizes it. then as the Tiger turns its turret Derrick tells the driver to move the tank quickly to the left so he does then the tiger fires and misses and then Derrick's team fires its another direct hit. As they looked around they noticed the panther got away. Then Derrick said, "Well 2 out of three aint bad."