Sgt. Kelzik

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Character Name: John Kelzik
Rank: Sergeant
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:

john was born in new york city where he worked on a fishing ship for most of his years after finishing school. john entered when he felt the war was about to start, jumping at the chance to fight for his country he entered the army, monthes later the united states went to war where a monthe afterward he was shipped out with his brother in arms.

Writing Sample:

john crouched on the ground hearing the distant sounds of gunfire made him tremble in anticipation but he c just couldn't get the feeling off his back that he was being followed. no matter how much closer he got to the fighting the feeling would get heavier and heavier, it was difficult for him to tell the diference with the browning on his back that he was carrying over to a gunners nest where they were apparently running out of ammo.

once again he heard a soft noise behind and as he turned around a german soldier jumped towards him, just barely managing to dive out of the way he lifted up his thompson only to have it knocked out of his hands. john took out his knife and dropped the browning, john took a look at the germans hand and noticed that he had a knife also apparently he tryed to kill him when the he wasn't looking. john stabbed forward only to hear a clang after that constantly john swung and swung the knife and soon both of the soldeirs were tired out, the german took the advantage when he knocked john to the ground john shelmet came off and the german said "john, what the hell are you doing out here i almost killed you".
john recognized the voice and said "pete, what are you doing wearing a kraut uniform" pete replied "what do you think i've been assigned to collect 'info on the german army" pete helped him up and they shook hands saying "it was good seeing you again and hopefully we do but i have to deliver this ammo".

Approved/Denied?: Denied
Staff Notes:

Ok The Reason Your Account Has Been Denied Is Because There Is Too Many Allied Members At The Moment. So I Would Like You To Create A Axis Account.

Thanks,

~ James