James Jordan Jones Bio

[TSgt. James Jones]

Character Name: James Jordan Jones
Rank: Captain
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: Italian
Character History:

James was from the Airforce for about 10 years. He now fights on the ground. For spacific reasons he does not like to talk about it. His dad was in war but past away getting shot by an M-16. James has always wanted to be like his dad. But not entirely. His dad had a drinking problem. When ever he got mad. He would lash James on the back with a whip used for do sledding. He's 30 now. And you can still see the scars. His mom divorced his dad before he was launched. His mom was a nurse for that war. And she died from a bombing run. James went to live in a foster home. He ran away when he was 15. Now hes here in the war. The reason he joined the war is because. He has no life. If he was killed, nobody would care. Not even himself. He has no friends. No more family. To him its just a world of. (I hope this isn't a to bad word to say.) hell. It was all about hemself in this war.

Writing Sample:

James clamped low to the dirt as bullets screamed right over his head. He was dirty and muddy. His clothes hadn't been washed for months. You could smell him from ten feet away. But it wasn't just him. He smelled like he was DEAD. In fact. Evryone did. He got closer to his enemy and socked him with his rifle. His foe fell down to the ground with a thump. Blood ran down his head as he stood up. "Come on guys! Move out!" The troops stood up. and ran for a fox hole. There was a metal plate in the fox hole. It looked to be like an under gorund hole. He lifted up the plate and there was a deep, deep trench. They climbed down it was crambed. And it smelled like a rotting body thats sat there for a decade. It was pitch black. He climbed down. And his foot landed in a puddle. He looked around. "Tro-" He got intterupted. He felt a smack to the back of his head. He fell to the ground about to faint. Hie eyes were beginning to close. He looked up and it was Jack Hossick. He was holding his gun and looking down at him in an evil way. He closed his eyes and fell into a deep sleep.

(Hope thats good enough!)

Approved/Denied?: Approved
Staff Notes:

With conditions, CO ranks happen to be closed at the moment. So unfortunately I can't give you the rank of Captain. Your application was really short, but I really see potential in your writing style, if you were to give me more writing I could offer you a higher rank at the moment I am willing to give you Sergeant, lucky to get this but feel free to add more to your application if you want for now it is sergeant, remember CO ranks are closed though so you can't get much higher only up to 1st Sergeant. So you are a sergeant and have the chance to add onto your application , to achieve a higher rank. Welcome to the board!! Have Fun!!


~Austin!
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EDIT:Thanks you will be given the rank of Tech Sergeant Welcome to the board!!!

~Austin!

[TSgt. James Jones]

Okay. I'll try to do that tonight. But if I can't. I'll leave it un finsished and finsih it tommarow! Thank's!

[Austin]

Well as of now you CAN Begin Rping if you didn't notice I issued you Equipment etc. So whenever you choose to post more for a higher rank is when you will receive it, so no rush here! Welcome!

~Austin!