Post by Furik Steinmarder on Oct 1, 2008 18:24:38 GMT -5
Characters Name: Furik Steinmarder
Rank: [no preference]
What Army Will You Serve Beneath?: Nazi/German Army
Nationality: German
Characters History:
Furik is in the army by pure rage. When he was little his parents were in a car crash which ended up killing them. He also learned that his grandfather was killed in the First World war by the British in the First World War. When he was a teenager the other kids in his school always teased him. Finally what pushed him over the edge was just a few weeks before he joined his two cousins were killed by the Americans. He then he made an oath on his parents graves that he would slay the Yanks and any other soldier in the Allied Nations.
Characteristics:
Furik doesn't care about anyone except for Adolf Hitler, his Commanding Officers, and his squad or platoon mates but even from time to time he dosen't care about them. He also extremely hates any Allied Soldier.
Writing Sample:
Furik was holding on to his Rifle as explosions landed near him, he could feel the dirt splash onto him when one landed. He looked up to see a bloody mess of soldier next to him, he then took a quick dash to the next foxhole. He heard bullets whizing past him, He took a quick aim of his rifle and nailed a soldier. He saw the soldier fall to the ground yelling "MEDIC!!!". More bullets whized past him, Again he took aim but he missed, he ducked down to avoid the incoming bullets. He happened to look over and see his Commanding Officer giving him the signal to move up."I have to get back to my squad" Furik thought. He looked frantacly to find them when he realized they were falling back,"cowards!" he said in his mind "didn't they see the commander giving the signal to move up". He finally decided to fall back with them anyways. Most of the army was falling back too. When Furik and his squad got to the Forward Command post, he got news of his next orders.
Approved/Denied?: Approved
Staff Notes:Welcome to the board decent application I am willing to give you the rank of, Unterscharführer, or Sergeant. Welcome!
~Austin!
Rank: [no preference]
What Army Will You Serve Beneath?: Nazi/German Army
Nationality: German
Characters History:
Furik is in the army by pure rage. When he was little his parents were in a car crash which ended up killing them. He also learned that his grandfather was killed in the First World war by the British in the First World War. When he was a teenager the other kids in his school always teased him. Finally what pushed him over the edge was just a few weeks before he joined his two cousins were killed by the Americans. He then he made an oath on his parents graves that he would slay the Yanks and any other soldier in the Allied Nations.
Characteristics:
Furik doesn't care about anyone except for Adolf Hitler, his Commanding Officers, and his squad or platoon mates but even from time to time he dosen't care about them. He also extremely hates any Allied Soldier.
Writing Sample:
Furik was holding on to his Rifle as explosions landed near him, he could feel the dirt splash onto him when one landed. He looked up to see a bloody mess of soldier next to him, he then took a quick dash to the next foxhole. He heard bullets whizing past him, He took a quick aim of his rifle and nailed a soldier. He saw the soldier fall to the ground yelling "MEDIC!!!". More bullets whized past him, Again he took aim but he missed, he ducked down to avoid the incoming bullets. He happened to look over and see his Commanding Officer giving him the signal to move up."I have to get back to my squad" Furik thought. He looked frantacly to find them when he realized they were falling back,"cowards!" he said in his mind "didn't they see the commander giving the signal to move up". He finally decided to fall back with them anyways. Most of the army was falling back too. When Furik and his squad got to the Forward Command post, he got news of his next orders.
Approved/Denied?: Approved
Staff Notes:Welcome to the board decent application I am willing to give you the rank of, Unterscharführer, or Sergeant. Welcome!
~Austin!