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Post by Dilon on Nov 11, 2008 16:23:48 GMT -5
Username: Boborush Character Name: Jonas Diefendorf Rank: SS-Private What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Nazi/German Army Nationality: German Character History: Jonas grew up in the suburbs of berlin. he was always full of rage so on his 18th birthday his parents told him to join the ss so he did now he has been in the ss for 3 months and now he is being sent to the western front to defend his country from americans Writing Sample: Running through enemy lines Jonas defnded his life bravely knowing he has to make it back home to sweet germany, he ran down the street tryign to find cover form the americans till he ran by one window bang bang bang bang bang, an american with a thompson shot him unconsicous now bleedign servely behind enemy lines jonas must decide to make a run for it and most likley fail, or surrender to the enemy and hope that some germans rescue him. Approved/Denied?: Approved Staff Notes: Ok, although very short I see potential in your writing you are accepted to the board as a Private!
Welcome,
~Austin!
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