Post by Eli on Nov 16, 2008 0:11:22 GMT -5
Username: Tucker
Character Name: Eli Spears
Rank: Staff Sergeant
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:
Staff Notes:
Character Name: Eli Spears
Rank: Staff Sergeant
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:
A great man by the name of Elijah Spears born- May 12 1918. Elijah had been born and raised in Charlotte N.C. and had finished high school with flying colors with 1 sister and no other siblings he lived in the country and went hunting every day, as to become one of the best shots in his hometown at the time. He had always been a leader in football and was a star quarterback. He had only his mother left and had always had to provide for his family since age 13. Living in the county with his best friend John they had many adventures and encounters. He had finished high school and then knew he couldn't take his life any farther. He knew what he had to do.Writing Sample:
This tree was safe, right? No way they could see me my ghillie suit had made me indigenous to this tree itself. I was the sniper I was nothing without it and it was nothing without me, we survived off of each other. I heard the crack of gunfire, had they found me?! I then saw my spotter off to find a new target area being dragged into a hole in the ground, blood pouring out of his ripped open gashed chest.Approved/Denied?: Approved
I had to finish my mission now we had been compromised i was still 17 miles away from anybody that will even speak my languange. I felt they were near me, lurking in the shadows, but i must slow my breathing and keep my head that was the most important thing to keep in mind at this moment. The night was gripping the earth just as I gripped to my tree. Then I saw him, my man, he was slowly walking to his transport. I slow my breathing, look to my scope for the one shot, the only shot. I slowly pulled back the bolt of my scoped springfield felt the bullet my only escape click into place.
!Snap! My shot rang out from the ridge all the way down to the small town. It all went slow as if I could feel his moment of sheer terror before... My bullet slammed into him right in the larynx and I knew he would struggle but there was nothing that could help him now...
Staff Notes:
Welcome to the board! Overall nice application.
~Austin!