vassili Koslov application

[matt]

Username: Koslov
Character Name: Vassili Koslov
Rank: Ñåðæàíò
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: Russian
Character History:

Vassili believed in communism, he would do anything for his motherland, when the war came along vassili was 17 but he still enlisted to help defend the motherland against the fascist bastards.

Writing Sample:

Gripping his rifle Vassili, afraid of what could be outside, he opened the door slowly and dashed across the street to were two of his comrade were being pinned down, he asked one comrade for the panzerfaust they got form the dead kraut, quickly one of his comrades shouted "ñïåøíîñòü! íåìåöêèé áàê ïðèõîäèò!" English translation: hurry the german tank is coming!. so Vassili ran into the middle of the road and fired the panzerfaust, it knocked him down, Vassili was about ot get up to see if the tank was hit but the tank was almost above him, Quickly Vassili took a gernade and put it under the tank and dashed quickly to the nearest cover before the gernade went off Vassili noticed his men were dead, Shell shocked Vassili came out of cover and was hit twice by a german kar 98, (Vassili is now in russian field hospital because Russian retook the town)

Approved/Denied?: Neither Yet
Staff Notes:

Approved! But i would have to give this one as a NO for the sergeant. And i shall have to award you the rank of Corporal as we only have few Russians here.
~Antonio

[Rolf Reinard]

Austin, for rank i was going for sergeant and for the russian line in the paragraph i used bable fish trnaslator and it didnt let me copy and paste it =[

[Eli Spears]

2 accounts?

[Rolf Reinard]

two accounts two chacters austin said i could