Post by Uyeda Ohtani on Dec 3, 2008 5:51:29 GMT -5
Username: ShogiKing
Character Name: Uyeda Ohtani
Rank: Sergeant (SS - Unterscharfuhrer)
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Nazi/German Army
Nationality: Japanese
Character History:
Staff Notes:
Character Name: Uyeda Ohtani
Rank: Sergeant (SS - Unterscharfuhrer)
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : Nazi/German Army
Nationality: Japanese
Character History:
Uyeda started out wanting to be a musician/pianist and his parents were very supportive. He wrote little songs when he was a child and started getting more and more complex of a songwriter and put on many shows, making his parents much money before the age of even 18.Writing Sample:
But after he turned 21 and was making a decent amount of money, Japan declared war and attacked Pearl Harbor in America. Sick to his stomach, he was forced to join the Imperial Army of Japan (Nazi/German Army was the only choice I had).
He didn't like it at first, but the war had made him brutal and cold. He had given up his dream of being a musician and wanted to spend his life in the army. It had tought him discipline, the meaning of labor, and how to fend for himself. He didn't care what his parents thought. He was a soldier now, and the only thing that matters is the death of every single American pig that dare to defile his homeland by walking on it.
Uyeda glared outside his foxhole, waiting for any and all Americans to come to the slaughter. He could barely contain himself, but he still did knowing that even the slightest mistake would give away the whole ambush.Approved/Denied?: Approved
The Americans were heading towards the bunker, just practically asking for death. He felt so good about it, that a smile slowly crept across his face. They were so stupid saluting their commander like that. He knew exactly who to kill first because of their foolishness.
The officer across from him began giving the signal to attack, but he kept quiet, waiting for the Americans until they were at their weakest. He noticed they were still suspicious, but didn't lose his smile. It was still easy, not too easy for the Americans though. He figured they would put up some fight, but wouldn't last too long.
The soldiers eventually lost their uneasiness and put down their weapons. One of them began investigating near a foxhole and that's when Uyeda lost his smile. He wanted to wait for the perfect time, but the Americans incompetence had ruined it. He took a breath, picked up his gun, jumped out of his foxhole, screamed at the top of his lungs, and attacked the nearest American officer.
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Overall decent application. Welcome to the board!!!
~Austin!