Nikolai Sergey Gorbachov

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Username: kingsean89
Character Name: Nikolai Sergey Gorbachov
Rank: waht evers Realistic for a sixteen year old
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: Russian
Character History:

Nikolai Sergey Gorbachov was born in the early years of the Russian rebellion that led to the former soviet nation, he witnessed years of war and poverty including the massacre of his family. As a young boy Sergey had to work at a factory to help support his family, his mother cleaned people’s houses and his father decided to join the cause. Little did he know by doing this it would lead to there own demise? Sergey was forced to quite school at an age of 10 which due to his dad not being around, and his mother not making enough to feed his eight brothers and sisters. Sergey did all he could to support his family he even gamboled and stole, which led to him being imprisoned , and untimely brutally abused as well as almost starved to death. He stayed imprisoned for four mouths he spent four mouths of brutal wiping, sexual and verbal abuse and nearly died of malnutrition. His mother had to sell her body to the warrant to allow his son freedom instead of his sentence to hang. He came back just in time to witness his five year old sister die from a unknown deadly flu epidemic, witch also took the life of his uncle, grandma ,and two of his cousins.

At the age of twelve, while coming back from a long days work Sergey found the body of a child brutally mangled, it wasn’t the first mangled body. There had been body’s turning up all over, most being around the woods where Sergey lived. With this a rumor went around his village that his family was so poor to keep food on the table, so they resulted to cannibalism to keep there family alive. Outraged and discussed and fearful they would be next the village formed a small mob, the mob stormed the families house beating and dragging them out of there house. They tied the family up and was just about to hang them, Sergey mother managed to spear there life. But for there life they had there house burned down and banish to the out skirts of the village never to return.


Ever since the horrible day they where outlasted from the village Sergey family continued to fall apart, Sergey mother couldn’t handle the pressure of her life, decided the family needed a father figure around so his uncle moved in. A extremely abusive drunk, his uncle rarely worked but his mother needed him around, one day when Sergey‘s sister went to the market. Sergey’s uncle on one of his drunken rants saw her leaving and followed her, he raped then strangled her to death. His mother devastated by this became striking by grief became ill Sergey and his siblings did all they could to heal her back to heath. His uncle was caught and hung, Sergey him self witnessed this. At the age of sixteen, a few weeks after Germans assault on Russia ,Sergey father came home but it was short lived. He told Sergey that they had to leave to the west to at once to fight in the war, at first Sergey Apposed but he new there was no choice.


Sergey father told Sergey that the German's had broke its promise with Russia and was on an advance toward Moscow. Sergey family fled to further east way from the front. Sergey and his father had no choice but to join the army and flesh the germens out there home land. But further grief struck Sergey, he was split from his father only to find out six moths later he was killed in combat.

Writing Sample:

Gripping his rifle Nikolai , afraid of what could be outside, he opened the door slowly and dashed across the street to were two of his comrade were being pinned down, he asked one comrade for the panzerfaust they got form the dead kraut, quickly one of his comrades shouted "ñïåøíîñòü! íåìåöêèé áàê ïðèõîäèò!" English translation: hurry the german tank is coming!. so Nikolai ran into the middle of the road and fired the panzerfaust, it knocked him down, Nikolai was about ot get up to see if the tank was hit but the tank was almost above him, Quickly Nikolai took a gernade and put it under the tank and dashed quickly to the nearest cover before the gernade went off Nikolai noticed the other men were dead, Shell shocked Nikolai came out of cover and was hit twice by a german kar 98, (Nikolai is now in russian field hospital because Russian retook the town)

Approved/Denied?: Approved
Staff Notes:

Overall decent application, I am accepting you to the board as the rank of, Senior Sergeant, or Старший сержант.

Welcome top the board!

~Austin!