Post by Drake on Jan 7, 2009 18:57:24 GMT -5
Username: drakeabens
Character Name: Drake Abens
Rank: Pvt.-Private
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:
Staff Notes:
Character Name: Drake Abens
Rank: Pvt.-Private
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:
Drake is currently 25.He has always loved collecting guns and going to shooting ranges.When he was only 5,his dad went to war.His dad was reported,KIA/MIA.Both were declared on Drakes dad.When Drake heard,he actaully cried.Drake never really cryed.Then,His brother was drafted in WWI.His brother came back missing a toe,and 3 purple hearts.Drakes brother then died 5 months later when the family was robbed.Drakes brother was stabbed in the stomach.Drake hit the burglar with a fire exstingusher,then hit the burglar with a hammer.When that didn't work,he went to the garage.The burglar was going for a knife when Drake came back into the living room.This time he wielded a shotgun.The burglar then blurted out."Don't shoot me man.Please don't"Drake didnt fool for it.He saw the burglar reach for a knife.BOOM!"Damn.Right in the leg.Well I ain't cleaning that up."Said Drake.The cops then arrived.They said that he did good not killing the robber.two years later,Drake heard about Japan getting close with war machines.Drake wrote a note to his mother then ran off to sign up.Writing Sample:
"Huh?Oh.Its daytime.Yipee."Drake said this while looking at a clock.Drake got up grabbing his uniform.He put on his uniform,Got his gear,and went outside."IN COMING!!"Drake heard this yelled out loud.Drake ducked in time to see his friends tent explode."Those b-He stopped.He didnt wanna finish the sentence.He took a Thompson.He knew his friend was in the explosion.Cause the book his friend always wrote in was lieing in flames with fresh ink on it."That it.They took it to far."He threw the Thompson down.He grabbed his M1 and ran into the woods.As Drake ran he noticed a tiger.It aimed down right at him."Oh Sh-BOOM!Drake rolled just in time.He planted a mine tank in the direction the tank was placed.He then yelled insults.The tank ran at him.He rolled away right as the cogwheels hit the mine.BOOSH!The tank commander ran out ignit on fire."Meh he took my friend.Atleast he'll get a taste of hell."Drake ran up a hill and took aim of a Kobelwagon next to an artillary piece.He aimed at the driver-A high ranking Captain.Blam!If this were a game,you would here "Boom!Headshot"Drake than took cover tossing a grenade.Boom!He heard german screams.He rolled up to them.He fired shots.Some missed but he killed each german.He placed a sticky bomb on the cannon.It ticked.Taking the Koblewagon,he drove back to camp.A sargent came up and said"We found the body.You can bury it.""Thanks"Drake replied.He was suprised to see his friend alive."Oh my god!How did you make it?!"His friend replied"I heard the shell coming and rolled out just in time!"Drake and the friend went to the shooting range for the rest of the day.Approved/Denied?: Approved
Staff Notes:
Decent application, welcome to the board. Although try to be more detailed, you will learn!
~Austin!