Post by Harry Yi on May 16, 2009 7:07:36 GMT -5
Username: Yi
Character Name: Daniel Steinert
Rank: Technician 5th Grade
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: Korea
Character History:
Staff Notes:
Character Name: Daniel Steinert
Rank: Technician 5th Grade
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: Korea
Character History:
Daniel was born on January 10th, 1924 on the South side of Chicago. He learned English, but his family spoke none, and he learned how to fight in the harsh conditions he was in. When he was 18 only a day after his birthday, the magic letter came, and the next thing he know he was in the infantry. He never made a compliant when he was in the army, and just followed orders. And by doing that he got through the entire war fairly smoothly with making friends with almost everyone in his platoon.Writing Sample:
Daniel, cut off from his platoon slowly crept through the dense forest. He got the feeling of when he was a kid being followed by a gang. He quickly spun around, but nobody was there. Even though he could see nobody, he could feel them there. After about half an hour of trying to get back to his own lines, a twig behind him snapped, and this time he swiveled around and emptied a clip from his M1. After that he ran as fast as he could, blindly in the opposite direction from he was under fire. And only a little bit after that, a bullet caught him in the left leg. He fell to earth with a tremendous thud. Now on the ground he turned around once again, but this time in pain. He was able to get his bearings, and knew in which direction the enemy was. He lay low, put a bandage on his leg from a captured German medic bag he took only a week before. After hours of hiding, he finally got up and began to walk, using his rifle as a crutch. By now his only objective was to get back to his lines. But then again he got that feeling, and this time a single German soldier opened fire with his rifle. Daniel lunged at the soldier determined to kill him. He used his fighting skills, and knocked the German out cold, but decided not to kill him. He took the stuff he wanted from him, and continued on his way. Eventually he heard vehicles on a road not far from him. He crawled the rest of the way, and spotted British trucks. He stood up against a tree, and yelled "It's good to see you all, but would you mind giving me a hand?"Approved/Denied?: Approved
Staff Notes:
Overall decent application welcome to the board!
~Austin