Robert Glas - Application

[Christian Oppenhagen]

Username: Robert Glas
Character Name: Robert Glas
Rank: Any Sergeant
What Army Will You Serve Beneath? : US(American)
Nationality: American
Character History:

Born into an Irish immagrant family. Growing up he had to deal with bullies and the slums. When he was old enough he joined the army of his country to serve and to prove himself to his family, to himself, and to his neighbors growing up. After basic training he requested to go to tank school to further prove himself.

Writing Sample:

As I walked through the German forest I felt that eerie feeling like someone was watching me, following me. I slowly drew my .45 from its holster on my belt. Checking it to make sure it was loaded then I search the forest.
"Must be my nerves," I thought, "I just got to go three more miles, just three more miles."
The wind blew over a patch of leaves behind me. I spun around to bring my .45 to bear but held my trigger finger.
"Its just the wind," I thought," Focus Bob, focus"
Then I countinued my slow walk back to the American lines, thinking "After this I am going to need a drink."

Approved/Denied?: Neither Yet
Staff Notes:

Both mistakes in spelling and grammer. Doesn't seem like you put much effort into your Character History although your writing sample was better. You need to keep going on and continue on what you have written. You can always try again and maybe look at other accepted applications to get a basic idea.

~ Heydrich Šechtl